tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2321571560710327220.post5383190765173309494..comments2009-12-12T09:13:58.430-08:00Comments on lightbulbsun: diary of a dead poetBetter Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13682559168731441961noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2321571560710327220.post-39747504834206353402009-12-12T09:06:32.615-08:002009-12-12T09:06:32.615-08:00niceeeee bastard!!niceeeee bastard!!....bR!nG it On...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02238303480747225484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2321571560710327220.post-3654037011895138072009-10-15T06:51:49.450-07:002009-10-15T06:51:49.450-07:00Beautifully constructed. Truly brings out the abst...Beautifully constructed. Truly brings out the abstract in you. Pleasantly intriguing, and yet subtly humble. At two places, I stopped, read again, and smiled. Very graphic and vivid at places. But you can further improve it. But do not tinker with it a lot, lest you will make it lose its essence. Way to go. Cheers.Pranay Guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02658757355514342725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2321571560710327220.post-62980253901089167582009-10-14T02:19:44.306-07:002009-10-14T02:19:44.306-07:00Garry, i've been through your work and i must ...Garry, i've been through your work and i must say that it's pleasantly intriguing and off-beat, unlike your dour self:); much better than "Cheerless Death" lol. A good writer, in my opinion, needs to flirt with divergence in his/her thoughts profoundly. But at the same time you shouldn't be bothered about critique 'cause your writing will lose the fizz if it's conditioned to suit the devouring appetite of the critics and not coming from your heart. Carry on....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08457248565642284655noreply@blogger.com